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Five things I don’t wanna see in YOUR indie superhero comic

on September 29, 2016 at 12:40 pm
Posted In: Blog

Five things superhero comic

Hello you!

First off, this list is subjective. It’s not ‘set in stone’ nor has it been written to make you feel bad for having any of the things listed in your comic.

Rather, read the list and take a moment when writing your next scene or upcoming issue to consider if any of these feature in your comic and maybe… maybe consider changing it?

This list is only five points long. It could have been much longer, but I tried to keep it to the main offenders. I get to read and look at a lot of small press/indie comics. I’ll read pretty much any genre but I have a special fondness for the Superhero one. Many whine that ‘Urgh, superheroes have been done to death!’. Having seen so many examples of what I’ve listed below, I can see how they arrive at that conclusion.

So, here we go!

1. Alley attack!

This list is in no particular order, but if it were, this one without a shadow of a doubt deserves the top spot. I see it in sooo many comics. So many.  It’ll play out something like this:

Young lady decides to take a short cut down a dark alley [insert reason here]. Off panel, from the shadows, she’s catcalled or similar. The woman spins to see about half a dozen street gang members bearing down on her! They all have a look – a look like they’ve stepped right out of a 90s Capcom side-scrolling beat ’em up game. Vague sexual threats will usually follow before… Dun da-da! Off panel, a gruff voice says some bad-ass line. The thugs turn to see our hero, wreathed in shadow, framed by the moon (usually). He then proceeds to beat the snot out of the thugs, sometimes doing some (sigh) Spider-Man style quipping (see point 2).

Vanguard 5 things superhero comic

I understand the point of this scene. It’s an introduction to our hero, what they do and how they do it. But does it have to be the same cookie-cutter scenario all the time? Why not a have the hero stop a bank heist? Foil an kidnapping of a visiting foreign ambassador? I just came up these two in the scenarios whilst I typed this column. Maybe make the scene relevant to the themes of the series. Is the hero all about helping those in need? Have them tackle some thugs trying to illegally evict tenants on the behalf of a slum lord. Will it be about Government? Have them stop a terrorist attack on a political target, etc. You get the idea.

Subverting the ‘Alley Attack’ cliche is totally cool. Playing on readers expectations to deliver a refreshing, surprise twist is what us writers should be aiming for, after all.

2. ‘Think SPAWN meets DEADPOOL’

This was a comment made by a creator when asked to describe their ‘new’ superhero character. Spawn meets Deadpool? Really?

When I read a web/indie comic starring a new superhero creation, more often than not it’ll be a straight rip-off or hybrid mix of either Batman/Spawn/Spider-man.

The shadowy vigilante types are invariably a straight Batman swipe, usually with ‘dark’ or ‘black’ or similar in their names. They boast gadgets and hang about on rooftops, etc. The same with SPAWN. Characters who have been given a chance at redemption by the devil (or similar) to bring down the naughty-naughty earth-bound sinners. I’m sure SPAWN wasn’t the first to do this (GHOSTRIDER, maybe?), but I’m laying the blame for the rafts of knock-off characters firmly on his shoulders. Again, there are a lot of them. And they all try to out ‘edge’ each other (see point 5).

As I mentioned in the first point, creators love to have their characters quipping as they fight their opponents, yet rarely (if ever) is it in any way amusing. It seems to be in the comic purely because they have seen other writers have their characters do it, with no real reason to do so.

So, in short – don’t make your character too similar to a pre-existing one. In fact, strive to minimize potential parallels. Your audience will be as familiar, if not more so, with the character you’re aping.

People might be quick to say ‘oh, just like so-and-so!’ when you introduce your new superhero character. Your writing and storytelling must/will show them otherwise. Trying to go head to head with the big two with your cloned superhero is destined to fail. Instead, offer something they’re not.

 

Troll Promotional image

Sadly, knock-off characters aren’t limited to just indie comics.

 

3. I SWEAR TO UPHOLD ALL THE JUSTICE!

This point ties in to the previous point. ‘A loved one is lost through tragic circumstances and our hero swears an oath to justice or similar’.

Come on. This has been absolutely done to death.

At this point, it’s pretty lazy to use this kind of thing as character motivation. Having an ‘Uncle Ben’-style tragedy as your character’s motivation to fight evil will once again draw unwelcome parallels to pre-established characters that have been around since before a large portion of people reading this would have been born. Try to come up with a fresh angle. It’ll make your character instantly more interesting than to have a motivation other than a boring, over-used cliché like a loved one perishing.

 

4. Stow the SPLASH PAGES and get some feedback

90’s Image comics! Splash Page! Splash Page! GASP! SPLASH PAGE!

Chill out with the splash pages!

I can only speak for myself, but I think new readers will enjoy your comic a lot more if it’s essentially not just a pin-up book, full of splash and double-page splash pages of your character. I’ve bought and read comics in which the entire first issue compromised of little but snarling muscle dudes and splash pages that added zero to the narrative. After finishing it, I had no interest in picking up issue two.

Sure, good art will bring readers into your comic but good writing is what will keep them there. This is where I highly recommend you get someone who knows a thing or two about the art to look over your story… BTW, this should come waaaaay before you consider putting pencil to paper. This individual needs to be someone who can tell you ‘this ain’t working’ and rather than you get huffy about it, consider it and change if needed to make it better.

Small press, Indie and webcomic production values are at an all time high right now and are only getting better by the day. For your comic to have a chance at being considered by a reader, it has to be well put together. Spelling mistakes must be spotted and corrected. All these little errors, although they don’t seem like much, will turn your reader off big time.

That said, splash pages are extreme effective when used correctly. And by correctly, I don’t mean over half of the comic.

 

5. Anti-Heroes

If every hero is an anti-hero, then none of them are.

Oh, your character is dark and edgy and kills people without a moment’s thought? How original.

There are absolutely loads of comics I see being produced with ‘blood’, ‘kill’ and ‘death’ or similar in their names. Packing pouches, guns and a rip-off Deadpool mask (see point 2), they invariably try to be edgier than the competition. I can’t say ‘stop doing this’ as it seems there is an audience for it, but would suggest that at some point, the market might get saturated with one too many GUNSTRYKE-style characters.

Anti hero Gunstryke

So, that’s it really. This was never about attacking those that do what I’ve listed above, rather to get creators to re-assess and consider what they’re doing and make it better.

Keep making those comics and keep having fun doing it 🙂

Dan

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‘The Spirit’ Life Drawing at Orbital Comics

on September 26, 2016 at 10:49 am
Posted In: Blog

Hello!

Orbital comics run host themed life drawing events in their shop in central London, the most recent being a one about Will Eisner’s character, ‘The Spirit’. Orbital recently won an Eisner award, which is well deserved, as it’s an excellent comic shop and my local one to boot!

Here’s how I got on:
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Dan Life drawing

There was a series of quick 10 minutes poses, finishing off with two 15 minute ones.

And here’s me in action, so to speak:

Dan life drawing orbital comics

(I’m the dude in the blue Robocop t-shirt by the yellow ‘back issue’ column)

Life drawing is an essential practice for artists. It’s something I really need to do a lot more often!

Dan

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Woden – By Nick Prolix

on September 1, 2016 at 10:16 am
Posted In: Fan Art

Vanguard print sheep and wolves

Morning!

Received some MORE awesome fan-art from super talented artist Nick Prolix. I absolutely love this. Fan-art really makes my day, especially when it’s in a style I couldnt do, like this one. 🙂

Go check out Nick’s comic, The Sheep and the Wolves

Dan

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Pendragon Fan-Art by Shane Rivett

on July 26, 2016 at 11:39 am
Posted In: Blog, Fan Art

Hello!

Received some fantastic fan-art of Pendrgaon!

Pendragon Shane Rivett Heroes of the world and beyond

It’s drawn by rising webcomic star, Shane Rivett. Go check out his comic, Heroes Of The World & Beyond. Shane and HOTWAB are the most recent members of the Collective of Heroes.

Dan

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Wolfshead Action Figure

on July 25, 2016 at 11:28 am
Posted In: Blog

Hello!

Last week was my birthday. Yay! I received so many fantastic presents, including ‘Airboy’ in hardcover, which is an absolutely fantastic comic, an awesome Robocop tshirt, some ‘Predator’ artwork from my wife, painted by Mike (Dust Piggies) Bromage.
Yup, I did good 🙂

A belated gift turned up on Saturday that blew me away. Fan of the comic and The Awesome Comic Podcast, Sarah Harris, made this absolutely amazing custom Wolfshead action figure:

Jordana Wolfshead Action Figure

Sarah has promised to pot up a ‘how I did this’ on her blog. I’ll link to it as soon as she does.

I have some ace fan-art posting up tomorrow. It’s a fantastic piece from a rising webcomic star, Shane Rivett.

Dan

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