V09 – Pg14
Hello once again!
First off, let me address some of the comments made on the previous page. In regards story/pacing, yep it’s moving at breakneck speed. There will be a slow down and a chance to flesh out characters. I’m relatively new to webcomics, well, writing them at least. I’ve still got a lot to learn but as with my artwork, I think one can see an improvement since issue one.
Now, today’s page.
Up through the atmosphere. Up where the air is clear
KingSword still has some fight left in him! You go, man!
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Vanguard usually updates twice a week (Wednesday and Friday), but it’s only updating once a week for the next few weeks. I’m currently drawing pages over at Reynard City and I only have a TWO more to do before I’m done. Hooray!
Dan
MrHades
Edited by
Gary Cohen
Who also produces the Excellent Mallville Rules comic – Go read!
Nicely done – looks like Kingsword has got his Heroic Second Wind (look it up on the TV Tropes website if you dare) but will it be enough? Max has proven he can take it as well as dish it out, so will ‘Sword be able to dish out more than Max can take?
I dare not go to that site anymore! I’ve read a few articles and realize I incorporate quite a few of them into my writing :\
TVTropes is ubiquitous in its relativeness. There isn’t an artistic work out there that isn’t on TVTropes, I wouldn’t worry to much over this.
Maybe it’s a perspective/angle thing, but it looks like Max’s injury and costume damage from that energy blast are gone.
Some of the costume damage on his shoulder seems to be missing, but the rest shouldn’t be visible from this angle anyway.
I figured that at the acute angle we’re seeing MaX from, the majority of the costume damage wouldn’t be visible. That and it being pulled back with the force of the push/strike… that’s the story I’m sticking too 😉
Hopefully we get to see psycho-claw-guy eviscerate himself. Kingsword should have snuck up on Maxtreme and twisted his head off. He’s probably going to make the classic mistake of trying to punish Maxtreme with a lengthy beatdown… which -given all the factors going against them right now, including that virus- is probably a bad idea.
Indeed! KingSword better start kicking some serious ass.. and quick!
pacing is fine Dan… you are here to break conventions…. Kill them all!
Cheers Bud!