V09 – Pg18
Another member of the Vanguard falls, but is Godiva down for good? You’ll have to keep reading and see!
Those arrows in panel two are a little on the large side. Didn’t notice till it was all coloured up and ready to go. Didn’t have the time to amend it. Speaking of arrows, the lady shooting them, X-Bow, is still happily tweeting away. All most as bad as my wife, ha!
The exploding eyeball was a last minute addition as a special ‘shout-out’ to Ben Jones. Hello Ben! Ben and I studied animation many years ago. I found it WAAAY to work intensive. Drawing still images was/is good with me 🙂
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Dan
MrHades
Edited by
Gary Cohen
Who also produces the Excellent Mallville Rules comic – Go read! It’s due to return to updating SOON!
Man. Good as always sir. My compliments on that last panel. It’s disturbing, made me cringe a little, but the art and your choice of perspective with the 3d affect of the eye is just great. Keep up the amazing work!
Keep an eye out for – Akk. Can’t finish lame pun 😉
Thanks for the feedback, Magus!
Well that caught her attention
It certainly did!
INCREDIBLE action and visual storytelling, Dan. Such an epic battle. Really really great. Stay brutal!
Thanks Max! I’m trying my best to match the intensity of your work on 3 Minute Max 🙂
I’m not well-versed in Superhero comics but yours is the best one I’ve read. Thanks for not sticking dialogue balloons everywhere, and letting the action speak for itself.
Thanks Max! I’ve observed that when people fight, they don’t talk. It’s why I keep virtually all dialogue out of those type of scenes.
I’m trying to get my Dad to realize this fact… Hasn’t really been working 🙂
GAH! WRITERS! Ha ha!
*sigh*
Everybody dies, yay.
I’ve been trying to stick with this but honestly? I don’t really know any of the characters, the heroes get killed in painfully unheroic fashions.
I’m out.
Sorry to hear that. Take care!
cast not pearls…
Taking a selfie and twittering it during a battle? Oh she needs to die.
She is not a nice person, at all.
It’s always hard to say of course. But the upper arrow looks pretty much dead on her heart. Which would definitely put our blonde bombshell (well, one of the two) out for good.
Yeah that looked like a killshot to me as well. I suppose the Vanguard will need to conduct a recruitment drive when this is over (and the author will have to redo the title image, since at least one of the members is officially deceased).
Open casting call! Want to be a member of a Brit-Based superteam? Must have super powers and a willingness to kill.
Not necessarily. Could be her tank top is laced with Kevlar, and she also has her sternum to block the hit on her heart. (Although there’s obviously nothing to stop the lower hit, which could even find her abdominal aorta).
Also, Woden might be able to lay some healing mojo on her.
All plausible… you’ll be able to see how it plays out in a few pages time!
Arrows in panel 2 look alright to me, I just thought it was perspective making them look large anyway.
I think I can get away with the bottom one with perspective… The other one’s a little large though.